I'm a crazy chick who somehow ended up a volunteer reviewer for Miss Portia de Moncur. I read m/m books and review them as honestly and passionately as I can.
a) This book needs serious editing. b) The whole gay-for-you, and being a first-timer hot in bed, going from straight to gay in split seconds just doesn't work for me. c) The writing was not the best either. I got tired of each sentence starting with "Joel did this.." and "Asher did that..". Very tiresome.